Image from Mickey Shannon Photography
The Crone of the Westward Hunch
For her Eastern twin went searching
And beneath her no road rushed
And none was long kept waiting
She took the lonely mountain paths
And the cowherd’s grassy trail
Towns and thoroughfares she passed
By day and starlight pale
Rare was the one who, pausing
Heard more than the branches sigh
In a wind down from the highlands
When the Westward Crone was nigh
It was a chill spring day at twilight
In the red crags of the hills
A jackdaw crowed, once, twice
And she passed a boy beside a rill
He was playing in the meltwater
And saw her coat of faded black
Her kerchief weathered of its flowers
Her stick of dogwood, worn and cracked
At Crone’s quiet “Good evening”
He dried his hands and joined her
They walked the empty road, staring
The Crone ahead, and the boy at her
Smoke ahead bespoke a chimney
And the boy presently inquired
Why she seemed bound to hurry
When by sunset, she must be tired
Though the Westward Crone slowed not
Her thoughts returned from faraway
And she smiled at the boy, who saw
A host of stories in her gaze
“I walk where my twin awaits me
And so it is, age after age
For she walks always behind me
And walks always the other way”
They climbed a little hill, to find
Themselves atop the ruddy range
Below sat a square stone cottage
And there the boy asked her to wait
“This is my mother’s house,” he said
“And I need only run inside”
To which the Crone answered,
“If not for long, then I shall try.”
The boy ran down to the gate
And ducked into the snug house
And a small kindness let her wait
The sun stilled, ’til he came out
In his hands something shimmered
And this he held up to the Crone
A reflection impossibly clearer
Than the smoothest lakes below
“It is too fine for us simple folk,
“Mother says I should give it to you
“So that you will not walk alone
“As your twin walks along behind you”
The Westward Crone beheld the mirror
And then her smile moved them both
For she glimpsed the East-hunched figure
In kerchief and faded old felt-coat
At last, “Thank you,” she ventured,
“This will be my dearest treasure
“And you will be remembered
“Each time I see my sister Eastward”
The boy watched her vanish as the sun
Dipped below the hilltops red
But over the cottage, from that day on
There lingered the most splendid sunsets
Loved this. It was enchanting! Favorite line: “For she walks always behind me
And walks always the other way” 🙂
Thank you!!
You have such a great gift for epic poetry! I could never write anything like this. Wow!
To be honest, I really struggled with this one – but thank you so much 🙂 I feel better about it having gotten a comment like this!