Toss paper boats, crisp and white
Where the ocean falls into the sky
Where fishes flash among the stars
And where the keening whale-songs are
Bridges between a-float and flight
© 2012 Elizabeth Cook
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This is really good!
Thank you so much for the kind comment 🙂
I love the imagery of your poem. I kind of want to take a trip to the ocean and throw a few paper boats in to see what happens.
Haha thank you, that’s a fun thought 🙂
Lily
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Thank you very much for reading, and the lovely comment!
short and sweet.
Thanks! 🙂
delicate and beautiful, like fine porcelain; lovely!
Thank you so much, John!
Lily
Gorgeous! And when partnered with the image you chose it takes on a celestial theme. Just lovely.
Thank you!
Like this, Lily. It has a nice, clean, airy feel to it (like the seashore).
Paul
That’s the sort of feeling I had when I wrote it, so I’m really glad to hear that!
Lily
This is lovely! Thank you for sharing, and thanks for dropping by my blog. 🙂
Thank you very much, and it was my pleasure!
Lily
How beautiful! Dreamy and sweet – love it! 🙂
Thanks, I’m really glad you enjoyed it!
What a beautiful response to that photo. Well expressed. I do love your writing.
Thank you very much, it’s great to know that you like it 😀
Lily
The photo and your words are a beautiful combination.
I spent a long time choosing the picture, I’m glad to know you liked the two together! Thanks for visiting 🙂
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Beautiful expression. 😀
Thank you for liking my poetry ‘Shopping Toddler Again’ and ‘Swaying Butt’. 🙂
Thank you very much! And it was my pleasure, I enjoyed my visit 🙂
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I love this one! Many thanks, Shelley
Thank you, I’m glad you enjoyed it!
Lily
This poem is very beautiful…i enjoyed reading it very much.
Thank you, I’m glad you enjoyed it!