Chased through the day by Arabian knights
From the dunes to a dock, to a deck I alight
One of sweet solid beams and sails like gold
In the catching of the sun, noon-high and bold
And with a creak of the keel out we sail
As I dance up the rigging, a spiderweb trail
That leads to the sky and the crack of the pennants
Colours whipping in the wind as the wind is spent
The sparkling expanse of the ocean below
Burns at my eyes and lights up my soul
I sway on the ropes with the rush of waves
Until coastlines break the blue on blue daze
Returning to the deck that carries us thither
On swift hands I flit down to the timbers
Now we drift into port, a foreign landing
A riot of colour where strange people are standing
Sights to feed excitement and curiosity’s hunger
The bazaars and parades and myriad wonders
That fill the skyline, city’s bustle and breath
Through which my feet may nimbly step
I a fleshed ghost with a scarf on my head
Travel their roofs, breathing spices and bread
Surveying their alleys, avenues, gardens
And hundreds of customs beyond my ken
Then from a white dome my scarf tumbles down
Raising eyes and cries to its ivory crown
And those people see that here am I
A wandering exotic and a wonderful prize
So off to the chase– I the fox once more
As I dash out their city again I may soar
Free and fickle as the quickest wind
When in pursuit another venture begins
I am for far hills, I am careless and light
To tire them by day as the Arabian knights.
© 2012 Elizabeth Cook
Image from Tomasz Jedruszek
Well done! This is an awesome read!
Blessings ~ Wendy
Thank you very much for reading and commenting!
Lily
Lily, this was really great. The imagery was superb and the rythm of the words keep the reader moving in step with the wanderer. Fantastic!
Paul
Thanks Paul, I was reading some of the Arabian Nights and got so many ideas from the short bit I read! I’m glad it turned out well!
Lily
Another epic! Phenomenal picture to go with it too
Thank you! I wasn’t sure what should be in the picture since there are many sights, so I just chose the first thing 🙂
Excellent concept – epic in fact. I was well into the rhythm of the galloping hooves when my mount stumbled a bit but I think you are well capable of smoothing the verbal path to maintain a steady pace. Perhaps also consider some assonance and consonance for richer harmony. 🙂
Those are some great recommendations, I was having trouble with this piece and finally let it stand. I’ll get back to working on it soon 🙂
Thank you for visiting and commenting!
Lily